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Hito
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Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
Laying in hospitals for awhile can get me to thinking. and when I think... either my life stories is written... or a song is written... enjoy...
Love’s A Sin
Can’t tell you how I feel Now that you’ve walked away, No time for goodbyes, Nothing more to say Only thing you left behind, Dried up in the dirt, Teardrop Trail on my mind, I couldn’t heal your hurt. You said that I’ve messed up bad, You told me what you thought. I kneeled there and begged please. You’re all that I’ve got,
But it’s too damn late I’ve waited too damn long Can’t have you back The love is gone. I dropped your heart Tore through your soul Now were apart, And now I know If I had one more chance I wouldn’t fight You’d be beside me Holding me tight But if this is how love ends… Love’s a Sin,
My heart just started pounding. In that ole downtown Café. Girl I used to know- just stepped Right through that small doorway. I started reminiscing I don’t know what to say Thinkin’ bout the good times The laughter that went away She took one glance at me Turned around to leave I held out my hand But She was gone with the breeze
But it’s too damn late I’ve waited too damn long Can’t have you back The love is gone. I dropped your heart Tore through your soul Now were apart, And now I know If I had one more chance I wouldn’t fight You’d be beside me Holding me tight But if this is how love ends… Love’s a Sin,
I’m Kneeling all alone now No one by my side, I said that I’m sorry baby, Why won’t you be mine… Again…?
But it’s too damn late I’ve waited too damn long Can’t have you back The love is gone. I dropped your heart Tore through your soul Now were apart, And now I know that-----,
But it’s too damn late I’ve waited too damn long Can’t have you back The love is gone. I dropped your heart Tore through your soul Now were apart, And now I know If I had one more chance I wouldn’t fight You’d be beside me Holding me tight But if this is how love ends… Yeah if this is how love ends… Oh if this is how love ends… Love’s a Sin,
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Kwang!
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Joined: Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:04 pm Posts: 4413 Location: Here.
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
Put it to music.
also, "we're" not "were".
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Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:06 am |
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Hito
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
I haven't figured out what kinda music I want to put it to... I have sang it before (my voice is horrible) if anybody ever wants to sing it like I do (cause it's the only way I've ever thought of it) and put music to it... so be it.
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Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:15 am |
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Kwang!
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
Hmm, I might try. Singing anyway, it's not terrible. Only thing is, I can't do it here. This place is like contagion to my creativity.
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Wed Apr 04, 2012 1:14 am |
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Karajin
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
I have a buddy who is pretty good with instruments, if you can think of a "style" you would like I may be able to get him to make something. This is pretty cool, I would love to see it as a complete song.
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Wed Apr 04, 2012 4:39 am |
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Makisupa
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish...
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Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:18 am |
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Hito
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
Idk what style I wrote it. Like I said it was during the time I was laid up in the hospital. So idk -___-
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Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:58 pm |
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Zander
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome.
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Wed Apr 04, 2012 3:29 pm |
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chronicW33D
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
Zander wrote: I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome. perhaps a 4/4 simple rock beat to it?
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Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:09 am |
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Hito
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
If anybody have the abilities you guys are suggesting, I wouldn't mind hearing what you guys can come up with.
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Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:50 am |
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Zander
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
chronicW33D wrote: Zander wrote: I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome. perhaps a 4/4 simple rock beat to it? idk that might sound weird.
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Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:46 am |
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unstawpable
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
beatbox to it.
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Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:11 pm |
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ResinCactus
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
Makisupa wrote: Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish... agreed i don't really like country but this is a decent song no matter what the genre
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Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:33 pm |
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Boundless.Knife
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Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
ResinCactus wrote: Makisupa wrote: Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish... agreed i don't really like country but this is a decent song no matter what the genre Deathcore?
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Tazzaler
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