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Short story thread, W.I.P.
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ResinCactus
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Joined: Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:37 am Posts: 1072 Location: Whats a Resin Cactus?
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Short story thread, W.I.P.
Walking past the melting stench of flesh, i wonder upon a scene that strikes a cord with my heart, there in front of me a little girl, with a rifle in hand, aiming at me, i don't dare approach, but sit and wait. The over hang above us, a city fallen in ruin, holds back most of the monters, she can see me, unhindered. She knows that i am a monster, but she can see that i, am not a normal monster. She pulls out a pack of what looks like cigarrettes and lights one up. I stand my ground, not for my own safty, but to see what will happen next.
ill add more later, im trying to be more, straight forwards.
_________________ When can one see, in the dark, but by its opposite.... light.TheBosman wrote: This is home . Done and done .
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Fri Dec 09, 2011 11:59 am |
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Kwang!
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Joined: Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:04 pm Posts: 4413 Location: Here.
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Re: Short story thread, W.I.P.
Walking past the melting stench of flesh, I wander upon a scene that strikes a chord within my heart. There, in front of me, a little girl, rifle in hand. She's aiming at me. I don't dare approach, but sit and wait. The overhang above us -a city fallen in ruin-, holds back most of the monsters, and she can see me, unhindered. She knows that I am a monster, but she can see that I am not a normal monster. She pulls out a small rectangular packet. It appears to be a pack of cigarettes, and sure enough, she slides one out and lights up. I stand my ground; not for my own safety, but to see what will happen next.
^^2 mins, I can do better.
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Fri Dec 09, 2011 8:36 pm |
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ResinCactus
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Joined: Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:37 am Posts: 1072 Location: Whats a Resin Cactus?
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Re: Short story thread, W.I.P.
i wrote it in 2 mins no sleep in one of my finals class butthead :P WIP!!!
_________________ When can one see, in the dark, but by its opposite.... light.TheBosman wrote: This is home . Done and done .
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Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:02 pm |
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Kwang!
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Joined: Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:04 pm Posts: 4413 Location: Here.
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Re: Short story thread, W.I.P.
Mine's still better. Now make it MOAR better, poopstain!
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Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:10 am |
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ResinCactus
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Joined: Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:37 am Posts: 1072 Location: Whats a Resin Cactus?
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Re: Short story thread, W.I.P.
play css more and maybe i will :P
_________________ When can one see, in the dark, but by its opposite.... light.TheBosman wrote: This is home . Done and done .
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CPTReynolds
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Joined: Thu Dec 04, 2008 12:00 am Posts: 4380 Location: Doing your Mom while your sister waits her turn!
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Re: Short story thread, W.I.P.
I touched her butt!
OWNED! Pow! Bow to the Cpt.!
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Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:58 pm |
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ResinCactus
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Joined: Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:37 am Posts: 1072 Location: Whats a Resin Cactus?
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Re: Short story thread, W.I.P.
Lol cpt ♥
_________________ When can one see, in the dark, but by its opposite.... light.TheBosman wrote: This is home . Done and done .
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Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:13 pm |
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