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 Short story thread, W.I.P. 
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Walking past the melting stench of flesh, i wonder upon a scene that strikes a cord with my heart, there in front of me a little girl, with a rifle in hand, aiming at me, i don't dare approach, but sit and wait. The over hang above us, a city fallen in ruin, holds back most of the monters, she can see me, unhindered. She knows that i am a monster, but she can see that i, am not a normal monster. She pulls out a pack of what looks like cigarrettes and lights one up. I stand my ground, not for my own safty, but to see what will happen next.

ill add more later, im trying to be more, straight forwards.

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Walking past the melting stench of flesh, I wander upon a scene that strikes a chord within my heart. There, in front of me, a little girl, rifle in hand. She's aiming at me. I don't dare approach, but sit and wait. The overhang above us -a city fallen in ruin-, holds back most of the monsters, and she can see me, unhindered. She knows that I am a monster, but she can see that I am not a normal monster. She pulls out a small rectangular packet. It appears to be a pack of cigarettes, and sure enough, she slides one out and lights up. I stand my ground; not for my own safety, but to see what will happen next.


^^2 mins, I can do better.

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i wrote it in 2 mins no sleep in one of my finals class butthead :P WIP!!!

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Mine's still better. Now make it MOAR better, poopstain!

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play css more and maybe i will :P

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I touched her butt!


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Lol cpt ♥

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