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| Author: | Hito [ Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:02 am ] |
| Post subject: | Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
Laying in hospitals for awhile can get me to thinking. and when I think... either my life stories is written... or a song is written... enjoy... Love’s A Sin Can’t tell you how I feel Now that you’ve walked away, No time for goodbyes, Nothing more to say Only thing you left behind, Dried up in the dirt, Teardrop Trail on my mind, I couldn’t heal your hurt. You said that I’ve messed up bad, You told me what you thought. I kneeled there and begged please. You’re all that I’ve got, But it’s too damn late I’ve waited too damn long Can’t have you back The love is gone. I dropped your heart Tore through your soul Now were apart, And now I know If I had one more chance I wouldn’t fight You’d be beside me Holding me tight But if this is how love ends… Love’s a Sin, My heart just started pounding. In that ole downtown Café. Girl I used to know- just stepped Right through that small doorway. I started reminiscing I don’t know what to say Thinkin’ bout the good times The laughter that went away She took one glance at me Turned around to leave I held out my hand But She was gone with the breeze But it’s too damn late I’ve waited too damn long Can’t have you back The love is gone. I dropped your heart Tore through your soul Now were apart, And now I know If I had one more chance I wouldn’t fight You’d be beside me Holding me tight But if this is how love ends… Love’s a Sin, I’m Kneeling all alone now No one by my side, I said that I’m sorry baby, Why won’t you be mine… Again…? But it’s too damn late I’ve waited too damn long Can’t have you back The love is gone. I dropped your heart Tore through your soul Now were apart, And now I know that-----, But it’s too damn late I’ve waited too damn long Can’t have you back The love is gone. I dropped your heart Tore through your soul Now were apart, And now I know If I had one more chance I wouldn’t fight You’d be beside me Holding me tight But if this is how love ends… Yeah if this is how love ends… Oh if this is how love ends… Love’s a Sin, |
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| Author: | Kwang! [ Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:06 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
Put it to music. also, "we're" not "were". |
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| Author: | Hito [ Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:15 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
I haven't figured out what kinda music I want to put it to... I have sang it before (my voice is horrible) if anybody ever wants to sing it like I do (cause it's the only way I've ever thought of it) and put music to it... so be it. |
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| Author: | Kwang! [ Wed Apr 04, 2012 1:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
Hmm, I might try. Singing anyway, it's not terrible. Only thing is, I can't do it here. This place is like contagion to my creativity. |
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| Author: | Karajin [ Wed Apr 04, 2012 4:39 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
I have a buddy who is pretty good with instruments, if you can think of a "style" you would like I may be able to get him to make something. This is pretty cool, I would love to see it as a complete song. |
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| Author: | Makisupa [ Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:18 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish... |
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| Author: | Hito [ Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
Idk what style I wrote it. Like I said it was during the time I was laid up in the hospital. So idk -___- |
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| Author: | Zander [ Wed Apr 04, 2012 3:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome. |
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| Author: | chronicW33D [ Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:09 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
Zander wrote: I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome. perhaps a 4/4 simple rock beat to it? |
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| Author: | Hito [ Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:50 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
If anybody have the abilities you guys are suggesting, I wouldn't mind hearing what you guys can come up with. |
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| Author: | Zander [ Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:46 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
chronicW33D wrote: Zander wrote: I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome. perhaps a 4/4 simple rock beat to it? idk that might sound weird. |
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| Author: | unstawpable [ Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
beatbox to it. |
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| Author: | ResinCactus [ Thu Apr 05, 2012 10:33 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
Makisupa wrote: Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish... agreed i don't really like country but this is a decent song no matter what the genre |
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| Author: | Boundless.Knife [ Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
ResinCactus wrote: Makisupa wrote: Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish... agreed i don't really like country but this is a decent song no matter what the genre Deathcore? |
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| Author: | Tazzaler [ Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) |
Cry me a F*CKING river. |
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