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 Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me) 
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Post Love's a Sin (Song Written By Me)
Laying in hospitals for awhile can get me to thinking. and when I think... either my life stories is written... or a song is written... enjoy...

Love’s A Sin

Can’t tell you how I feel
Now that you’ve walked away,
No time for goodbyes,
Nothing more to say
Only thing you left behind,
Dried up in the dirt,
Teardrop Trail on my mind,
I couldn’t heal your hurt.
You said that I’ve messed up bad,
You told me what you thought.
I kneeled there and begged please.
You’re all that I’ve got,

But it’s too damn late
I’ve waited too damn long
Can’t have you back
The love is gone.
I dropped your heart
Tore through your soul
Now were apart,
And now I know
If I had one more chance
I wouldn’t fight
You’d be beside me
Holding me tight
But if this is how love ends…
Love’s a Sin,

My heart just started pounding.
In that ole downtown Café.
Girl I used to know- just stepped
Right through that small doorway.
I started reminiscing
I don’t know what to say
Thinkin’ bout the good times
The laughter that went away
She took one glance at me
Turned around to leave
I held out my hand But
She was gone with the breeze




But it’s too damn late
I’ve waited too damn long
Can’t have you back
The love is gone.
I dropped your heart
Tore through your soul
Now were apart,
And now I know
If I had one more chance
I wouldn’t fight
You’d be beside me
Holding me tight
But if this is how love ends…
Love’s a Sin,

I’m Kneeling all alone now
No one by my side,
I said that I’m sorry baby,
Why won’t you be mine… Again…?

But it’s too damn late
I’ve waited too damn long
Can’t have you back
The love is gone.
I dropped your heart
Tore through your soul
Now were apart,
And now I know that-----,

But it’s too damn late
I’ve waited too damn long
Can’t have you back
The love is gone.
I dropped your heart
Tore through your soul
Now were apart,
And now I know
If I had one more chance
I wouldn’t fight
You’d be beside me
Holding me tight
But if this is how love ends…
Yeah if this is how love ends…
Oh if this is how love ends…
Love’s a Sin,

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Put it to music.

also, "we're" not "were".

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I haven't figured out what kinda music I want to put it to... I have sang it before (my voice is horrible) if anybody ever wants to sing it like I do (cause it's the only way I've ever thought of it) and put music to it... so be it.

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Hmm, I might try. Singing anyway, it's not terrible. Only thing is, I can't do it here. This place is like contagion to my creativity.

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I have a buddy who is pretty good with instruments, if you can think of a "style" you would like I may be able to get him to make something. This is pretty cool, I would love to see it as a complete song.


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Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish...


Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:18 am
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Idk what style I wrote it. Like I said it was during the time I was laid up in the hospital. So idk -___-

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I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome.

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Zander wrote:
I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome.



perhaps a 4/4 simple rock beat to it?

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If anybody have the abilities you guys are suggesting, I wouldn't mind hearing what you guys can come up with.

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chronicW33D wrote:
Zander wrote:
I would put piano to this and just singing, I think it would turn out pretty awesome.



perhaps a 4/4 simple rock beat to it?


idk that might sound weird.

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beatbox to it.


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Makisupa wrote:
Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish...



agreed i don't really like country but this is a decent song no matter what the genre

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ResinCactus wrote:
Makisupa wrote:
Reads like a country song....unless it was designed to be emoish...



agreed i don't really like country but this is a decent song no matter what the genre


Deathcore?

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Cry me a F*CKING river.



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