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| Author: | ResinCactus [ Fri Dec 09, 2011 11:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Short story thread, W.I.P. |
Walking past the melting stench of flesh, i wonder upon a scene that strikes a cord with my heart, there in front of me a little girl, with a rifle in hand, aiming at me, i don't dare approach, but sit and wait. The over hang above us, a city fallen in ruin, holds back most of the monters, she can see me, unhindered. She knows that i am a monster, but she can see that i, am not a normal monster. She pulls out a pack of what looks like cigarrettes and lights one up. I stand my ground, not for my own safty, but to see what will happen next. ill add more later, im trying to be more, straight forwards. |
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| Author: | Kwang! [ Fri Dec 09, 2011 8:36 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Short story thread, W.I.P. |
Walking past the melting stench of flesh, I wander upon a scene that strikes a chord within my heart. There, in front of me, a little girl, rifle in hand. She's aiming at me. I don't dare approach, but sit and wait. The overhang above us -a city fallen in ruin-, holds back most of the monsters, and she can see me, unhindered. She knows that I am a monster, but she can see that I am not a normal monster. She pulls out a small rectangular packet. It appears to be a pack of cigarettes, and sure enough, she slides one out and lights up. I stand my ground; not for my own safety, but to see what will happen next. ^^2 mins, I can do better. |
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| Author: | ResinCactus [ Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Short story thread, W.I.P. |
i wrote it in 2 mins no sleep in one of my finals class butthead :P WIP!!! |
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| Author: | Kwang! [ Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Short story thread, W.I.P. |
Mine's still better. Now make it MOAR better, poopstain! |
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| Author: | ResinCactus [ Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Short story thread, W.I.P. |
play css more and maybe i will :P |
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| Author: | CPTReynolds [ Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Short story thread, W.I.P. |
I touched her butt! OWNED! Pow! Bow to the Cpt.! |
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| Author: | ResinCactus [ Sat Dec 10, 2011 8:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Short story thread, W.I.P. |
Lol cpt ♥ |
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